Since I wasn’t able to attend class when we were doing the workshops in class, when looking at the comments by Casey and Sydney, they both gave me really valuable insight for what I could be doing better. Both had a common theme of getting a quote or two from Professor Siegel in order to get to know him better and his side of the story. I wasn’t able to get a quote from him at first but I am still working on that. Sydney made a good point of fixing up my headline and subheadline because as of right now my headline is way too long but it would be good as a sub. Casey made a good point of potentially getting a quote from professor Cripps of why he chose Siegel for the job. Overall, I learned a lot of things I could do in order to make my profile even better with more quotes from Professor Siegel himself and maybe some more insight on how he got this job to begin with.
